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    dots Submission Name: New Songdots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 750
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 635



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    dotsNew Songdots
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    Today I sing a new song,
    of happiness and joy.
    No more sad tears
    will fall for me.
    My soulmate has returned,
    to his family, his babies and me.
    Smiles upon my face,
    I will show to everyone.
    Not that it will be needed,
    for you can see the glow in my eyes.
    Laughter now fills the
    living room,
    Where once nothing,
    but tears and sorrow once lay.
    All is well in this home,
    and for that I thank the One above.
    Please never leave us again,
    I beg of you to stay.
    Never to take away,
    the new song I sing today.




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:33:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is very straght and to the point...It shows how much you care and love this person. I love it and I am glad that your love has returned. Beautiful piece...Keep it up
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    Katie
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by Lover girl | [ Reply to This ]
      
    a joyous piece, plainly and very simply told...nicely done overall...bravo...
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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