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    dots Submission Name: All Over Againdots

    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsAll Over Againdots

    Today I fell in love with you all over again,
    the look in your eyes touched my soul.
    The memory of the love we shared,
    came rushing back like a tidal wave.
    It all felt brand new once again,
    A new beginning you said.
    A wonderful feeling,
    like soulmates meeting for the first time.
    Only better this time around,
    for we are stronger than before.
    My heart leapt to my throat,
    as you touched my face.
    "You mean the world to me"
    those words kept running on and on.
    Only this time it was for always,
    for I fell in love with you all over again

    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:34:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really likes how you said
    "Today I fell in love with you all over again,
    the look in your eyes touched my soul."
    That is beautifully writen. Keep writing and posting cause I love to read your work
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by Lover girl | [ Reply to This ]

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