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    dots Submission Name: All for Youdots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 647
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1504



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    dotsAll for Youdots
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    All for You
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    you were made for me
    you are mine
    you are my soulmate
    you are my best friend
    you are my lover
    you are the emotions deep inside my body
    you are my husband now and for all eternity
    death can't even take that from us.
    faith....
    hope...
    honesty...
    trust...
    patience....
    love...
    dreams....
    all these things will help us hang on to what we long for the most....time
    time to be with each other
    time to live our dreams
    time to love
    time to hold each other
    time to share our deepest feelings
    time to be ....
    to be what we are
    two people that love each other more than life itself
    two people that can count on one another for what we need most
    through the tears....
    pain....
    heartache....
    storms that we can't imagine....
    and all the good and wonderful times that we need....
    want....
    desire....
    for all conditions in this world i will be here
    i will love you
    i will wipe your tears away
    i will bring smiles to your lovely face
    i will make your heart skip a beat when you least expect it
    i will hold you for better and for worse
    i will never leave you unless you want me too
    anything to make you happy now and forever.







    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:35:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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