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    dots Submission Name: love and losedots
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    Author: Martha McEntire
    ASL Info:    34/f/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 27/25/22
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotslove and losedots
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    Love and Lose
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    I say it is better to love and lose
    than to never love at all.
    Even though I say it
    doesn't mean that I believe it.
    People take love for granted
    way too many times in life.
    When we do find it
    most of the time it isn't forever.
    He said "you are my soulmate"
    but am I?
    He doesn't feel the same
    about me anymore.
    So no wonder I don't believe
    and I don't want to dream.
    Filled with so much anger
    and I don't want to feel the pain any longer.
    So maybe this time it is better
    that I lose and not love.









    Submitted on 2006-11-29 17:36:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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