...haiku ordinarily will deal with nature and its ways and i daresay you know that, which is why this is up my alley because it's iconoclastic in that respect and well, 'he said she said' awkward too...
leave aside the preferred medium for haiku, i do think though that it should follow that other rule; the one that says:
lines 1 and 2 should be a complete story
and lines 1 and 3 should be a complete story
and lines 2 and 3 should be a complete story too so:
i hate you so bad
then know that hate is passion
so i must love you
oh you know what i mean. so why not spend some more time working out the tone and tenor of the haiku - it's a winner when it's got right...
I really like this. I think a lot of people can relate. the only thing is that, because of that, it kinda feels like it's not original, but, then again, it's a haiku which i haven't seen a lot of people do. For that, I give you kudos.
Submission Name: Forced to Love You
