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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 730
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 508



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       man... this the first thing I been able to get out of my head in a long fuckin time. so yall juss tell me what u think. I'm sorry for ya time if iss bad.


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    stealin the show/
    rockin, and ready to role/
    no more hoes to get blowed/
    I'm juss gettin that doe/

    like ray cash, I make a hater wanna hate even mo'/
    the Aberrant Kings is blowin' up we startin to grow/

    forreal though I'm benevulent/
    cross me mayne, I don' forget like a elephant/
    what you smellin through the vent,thass gasoline/
    and yo' I"m bout to make it right, like a cash machine/




    Submitted on 2006-11-29 22:20:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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