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    dots Submission Name: Alyona part 12dots
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    Author: whendt
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    Words: 559
    Class/Type: Story/
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       Now we meet the lady Vampire for the first time...


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    dotsAlyona part 12dots
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    Many nights have passed and I think of a place that is cold.
    My mind drifts right out the window and on past the hills.
    A Elton John song plays in the back ground and I smile
    and start to sing along.
    "Mars ain't the kind of place to raise your kids,
    in fact its cold as hell
    and there no one there to raise them if you did.
    And all this science,
    I don't understand.
    It's just my job, five days a week,
    A Rock..............et ma...............n." I love a good Elton John song!
    Tomorrow night the train will arrive in Moscow
    and soon my adventure will begin.
    A knock on my door and I'm brought back to reality
    Its seem we have a lay over in Saint Petersburg
    I decided to get out to stretch my legs a bit and check out the night life.
    Soon as I stepped out into the night air I synced one of my own kind…
    I looked around to see if I could tell which way it was coming from.
    This one was very smart and knew how to keep them self hid.
    I heard music coming from one the clubs and decided to go investigate.
    The kids today glorify Vampires and even have bands that act like us.
    I walked in and one of those bands was playing Type O Negative.
    I turned my head quickly just in time to see you…
    I woman vampire and very sexy!
    You did not see me yet because you were caught up in the music.
    The song played on and it reminded me of you.
    “She's in love with herself
    She likes the dark
    On her milk white neck
    The Devil's mark
    It's all Hallows Eve
    The moon is full
    Will she trick or treat
    I bet she will
    She's got a date at midnight
    With Nosferatu
    Oh baby, Lilly Munster
    Ain't got nothing on you
    Well when I called her evil
    She just laughed
    And cast that spell on me
    Boo Bitch Craft
    Yeah you wanna go out
    'Cause it's raining and blowing
    You can't go out
    'Cause your roots are showing
    Dye em black
    Black No. 1
    Little wolf skin boots
    And clove cigarettes
    An erotic funeral
    For witch she's dressed
    Her perfume smells like
    Burning leaves
    Everyday is Halloween
    Loving you
    Was like loving the dead.”
    It reminded me of you even though I had never met you before?
    When the song was over you looked right in my eyes.
    You were probing my mind but I was far to good for that!
    I started to walk towards you and like a cat you disappeared.
    I thought to my self “ You little minx!”
    I turned and before I got all the way around you were there
    In front of me.
    Well, Well my lady the night is getting better…
    She smiled and asked what my name was?
    I told her” I don’t know you that well!”
    She said “ Then perhaps we should get to know each other better?”
    She asked if I was hungry? I replied” Always.”
    I know a place we can get a BITE and then get to know each other better.
    I told her to lead the way and we headed out into the night…




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      woohoo! yeah, this is getting so great!! i do prefer this one, you were right...you knew you would be.
    excellent introduction to the lady vamp, makes us wanna know more, whats gonna happen..c'mon....haha
    brilliant chapter. nice work, whendt.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]



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