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    dots Submission Name: hope, love, trustdots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Hope is something you hold onto,
    It never fades away,
    Hope is what helps you through,
    Your most dreadful days,
    Love is what will keep you alive,
    Whether youíre broken hearted or not,
    LoveÖ itís that one thing,
    That never gives up,
    Trust is something that takes minutes to build up,
    But it only takes a few seconds to shatter,
    I guess what Iím saying here is,
    Never give up,
    Follow your dreams,
    And listen to your heart,
    But always make sure you have,
    Hope, love, and trust.




    Submitted on 2006-11-30 08:56:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You Know how to move on after something almost kills you and that is what will help you become the best person that you could ever be.
    There are few people who accept that they will become a great people and I hope that you will accept it. This is a wonderful piece. Keepup the great work.
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Lil_ Buddy | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful message Brittaney. A great poem, never a truer word spoken. Well done, can't wait to read more of your work. x

    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
      Its ok I guess like words of encouragement
    Well I read you poem or writting, ty
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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