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Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
Words: 202
Class/Type: Poetry /
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Being stabbed in the back and you can no longer find love, Without thinking back to the pass.


Alone in the darkness
With nowhere to go
Scared to go back into the light
I have nobody

In the light where I'm from is also full of darkness
No one to trust
No one to hold
No one to call my friend

Betrayed by your closest friend
Betrayed by your lover
I am now stuck in the darkness

Im full with fear and madness
Im full with pain
Stranded in the darkness
Stranded in life

Betrayed by a love one
Betrayed by society
Betrayed by You

Im lost in space
With nothing but the stars and the planets around
Cant seem to get out of the dark space that surround me
My first true love has betrayed me
My only best friend has betrayed me
Stuck in this cruel world

Im all alone now
Back into the light
Still in this cruel world
For the light is still dark
My heart is surrounded by darkness
My life is in darkness

Betrayed in the light
Betrayed in the darkness
Betrayed in this cruel world
Every where you go there is cruelity
Somewhere in life you would be betrayed.

Submitted on 2006-11-30 17:09:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Sounds like your stuck in a hard place at the moment Latti, i know you'll be able to pull through and make it to the light at the end of the tunnel. Im in awe of the emotion you've managed to put into all of your poems so far, keep it up. Im looking forward to your future work. Well done xxx

| Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
  It is not healthy to feel that way.. somehow you have got to move on.. staying in darkness can overshadow your reasons.. the world is only as good or bad or as painful as you want it to be..
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by E. Audine | [ Reply to This ]
  It's strange how one person can screw up your whole life, ain't it. But wounds only heal with time. Great write.
Keep it up I wanna read more,
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
  you shouldnt have to live your life in fear like that... its all a matter of trusting yourself and not relying on anyone else to make your life happy...
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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