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    dots Submission Name: I Dream Awakedots

    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Just thinking about what's going on in my life.

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    dotsI Dream Awakedots

    Sometimes my worst nightmares,
    Come to haunt me in the flesh;
    I'm not even scared,
    But my twisted reality is a mess.
    And sometimes I just dream awake,
    The dreams I've never had,
    Is it my stomach that really aches?
    Or just the hunger I suffered from the past.

    There's no more imagination,
    I made some of my thoughts the bitter truth,
    There's no final destination,
    But sometimes I dream awake,
    The things I can't quite prove.

    Submitted on 2006-11-30 17:56:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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