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Fade Away


Author: Kasper187
ASL Info:    24 m Texas
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Words: 296
Class/Type: Lyrics /Longing
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Fade Away



Fade Away
© ©2006 Anthony Paul Garcia/
-SorrowsNomdeplume

Can you take it all away
Don't let the love fade
Take a look at the hurt you never knew you made...

Drown my sorrow in hopeless reason
Without thinking of tomorrow
the sadness never ending
Hidden pain within so much broken desire
The tears I cry fall deep unto the lonely fire

Show me a world without pain
I will show you a love without rain
Sadness and darkness hand in hand
Because of this pain I am a better man

Can you take it all away
Don't let the love fade
Take a look at the hurt you never knew you made...

So blind to you it is all in my eyes
Someday when you see it all inside
You will know why
I am lost inside this pain I feel
Searching forever for what might be real
Knowing inside that there is a reason for it all
Feeling it everyday I know in the end I must take a fall

Can you take it all away
Don't let the love fade
Take a look at the hurt you never knew you made...

If there was no pain would there be happiness
If you knew my heart would you think like this
Sometimes when I am lost in myself
I find in the end it is all the same
When all of the tears dry I cannot help
But wishing away this pain again and again and again...

Can you take it all away
Don't let the love fade
Take a look at the hurt you never knew you made...




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  i [censored] love this poem!!! we should get in contact cuz me and my band are interested in using this as a song! my email is evanescencegirl01@yahoo.com or my name on here is poetic_tragedy.
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by poetic_tragedy | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow. I love it. A lot. ^__^ reminds me of my own writings. KEEP IT UP.

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-- Jason Clement
| Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Jason_Clement | [ Reply to This ]


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