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    dots Submission Name: Wishful Desiredots
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    Author: WD-40
    ASL Info:    21/F/Bangleby
    Elite Ratio:    0.95 - 206/72/10
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1189
    Average Vote:    4.3333
    Bytes: 334



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    dotsWishful Desiredots
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    It's the end! They all say.
    That mankinds reaching its worst.
    Falling futher and futher.
    Emotions overloading
    Sociaty fearing
    Government fucking
    Cult leering
    Are you ready for death?


    Wishful desire
    To be non-existent is but a dream...





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    ||| Comments |||
      it's good but not one of my favorites of yours but good you rock
    | Posted on 2009-03-01 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this, The vibe is the coolest it makes me howl at the moon. and wispher for nothing matter and if something did i for got about it long time ago.
    | Posted on 2007-10-11 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]
      the poem ~made me feel as if someone ~
    can see the how it all going to hell!

    do you hear me drop tears! very real~
    | Posted on 2007-10-04 00:00:00 | by ms.v | [ Reply to This ]
      Love this poem! Its short but it says all it needs to say. AWESOME!!!
    | Posted on 2007-09-15 00:00:00 | by sugar_sweet | [ Reply to This ]
      Oo I really am speechless, this just...is great. It shows how corrupt the world is in one line, and how bad some people's lives are. Good job.
    | Posted on 2007-04-05 00:00:00 | by Fernando Corto | [ Reply to This ]
      Very very nice, thats something i would say.
    Im not ready for death yet but i see it in the near future.

    Kube.
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ]
      i am not ready for death. neways i liked this. how u said "r u ready for death?" that's not something alot of writerswill put into a work. it'll be all ladeeda happy. and stuff or it'll be stuff that's so dark that it gives people nightmares, maybe i'm too picky, but i liked this.

    toodles.

    davi
    | Posted on 2007-02-24 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]
      YOU KNOW DEATH IS JUST THE BEGAINING FOR THE ONES THAT HAVE GIVEN THEIR HEARTS TO GOD, FOR THOSE THAT HAVE TURNED GOD AWAY DEATH IS JUST A BREATH AWAY.
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by Bones | [ Reply to This ]
      ive been awaitin for death
    cuz death is comin no matter wat
    its tracin my steps
    i could feel it

    but watever just chilling smokin a cigg
    nice write simple. and just simple
    but right to the point

    keep in touch your boy
    twistedminded
    | Posted on 2007-02-18 00:00:00 | by TwistedMinded | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so cool. i mean it sounds dorky to say the word cool but its just..wow. i totally agree with you and i dont know what to say!
    | Posted on 2007-02-12 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]
      Simple. Sweet. Straight to the point! Icy chill!
    | Posted on 2007-01-11 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      I have to agree with ur work, it sums up exactly how I feel about people as a whole fukin up [censored].
    | Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      dude you didnt sigh
    | Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by social circus | [ Reply to This ]
      Whoah . . . . . . man . . . . . I have been thinkin about this a lot lately . . . . . . . . . . . . . you know. . . cuz of what's goin on and all that. . . . . . . . it's crazy . . . . . I really like this one . . . . . . . oh gosh . . . . I better stop writing before. . . . . yeah . . . don't wanna think about. I just feel sick. Well his is a great poem. It is def. on my faves


    peace man

    >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>>

    G FREAK
    | Posted on 2006-12-19 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]
      Indeed, but what do you think, is it the end? If so, time go out with with a bottle tippped and something lit. Life is to short for the medeoker, live fast and die young. Poke fun at the dying ones, and cast your heart to the setting sun. Because in the end, everything we do is, is everything we've done.
    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by Silenced poet | [ Reply to This ]
      I am more then ready for Death
    To to tell you the truth I cant wait to enter the Gates of Heaven and Live Life eternal but I am not rushing it
    We have as a race almost destroyed the Beautiful Gift of Earth God gave us
    We are killing our fellow man and poisoning our fellow man without at times knowing we are
    I say to The World Please WAKE UP and take notice of how we ALL are destroying our very own Lives
    We need to take control of this situation and we need to do it now
    Otherwise The Earth will soon be no more and Human Life will go the way of the Dinosaur
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey your a pretty good writer you should put more poems on here so I can read them. Anyway great write!!!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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