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    dots Submission Name: Mind Controldots
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    Author: rocknpoetrychik
    ASL Info:    20/Female/Someplace
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 331/281/44
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 155
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 239



    Description:
       i threw this out in less than 3 minutes, i have a fever, dont mind the submission, im sure it sucks


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    dotsMind Controldots
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    Elusive, restless
    Reclusive, defensive
    Thoughts swirling
    No concentration
    Relaxation
    Evading life
    Succeeding with sickness
    Weak from fear
    Outside is the demon
    Inside I am safe




    Submitted on 2006-11-30 23:24:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is actually a fantastic write for only taking 3 minutes
    You spoke great truth
    People do need more time to relax and perhaps meditate and realize in order for the Life they are living to change they need to make the changes themselves
    Again really informative and very well written write
    I look forward to reading more of your writes in the future
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      k. this to me is just a list of adjectives. it has no meaning. no substance. what is this about? i think you're trying way too hard to be profound.
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by narcolepsy | [ Reply to This ]
      sorry about that. but still, you shouldn't have posted it then.
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by narcolepsy | [ Reply to This ]



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