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    dots Submission Name: Poem VIIdots
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    Author: Castalia
    ASL Info:    666/N/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 16/33/33
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 103
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    dotsPoem VIIdots
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    Is there anyone there?
    Could you help me?
    I'm looking for something...
    But, I'm afraid, I'm lost.

    I came from the woods,
    Far east, near the heavens.
    Where the fairies play,
    And the dragons roar.

    I come from a place
    Deep inside a neverland
    It's fill with candy-canes,
    Where only happiness prevailes.

    Anyone who has seen this land,
    Never wants to leave,
    For they fall in love with it
    And are cast away to their heave.

    Instead of blues skies on sunny days,
    It's rainbow nights everyday.
    In place of clouds and wet rains,
    We have cotton-puffs and star-dust rains.

    One complaint, I'm afraid:
    A never ending cycle,
    When nothing ever goes wrong
    And everything always perfect.

    It's a whole bore.

    Same story every moment,
    Only repeation occurs,
    No mystery of tomorrow.
    Just the replay of today.




    Submitted on 2006-11-30 23:42:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Exactly! I love your point here. Imagine how dull life would be if everyone were a milk drinking,smiley face,wonderland wonderful cookie eating angel? ARG! Sickens me to think about it. Adversity defines character. If existence were easy who would know the definition of bliss? Without pain the reward of happiness is non existent. Well at least here on planet earth! I can't speak for all the people who believe we fly little white puffy clouds with harps up to heaven when we die. Personally I'm really not dying to chill out at an eternal bible study, but hey that's just me! Anyhoo I am rambling and taking up mucho space on your page here. Sorry bout the ramble. Love the poem.

    Take care
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    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]
      This one is interesting. Quite an original read and a very unusal ansamble of words. I admire your talent. Every poem you write is always something new and unexpected but also carries a dash of mistique and finesse. Well done.
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]



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