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    dots Submission Name: have you ever?dots
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    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 563
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 528
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 3615



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       about love what more can i say?


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    dotshave you ever?dots
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    Have you ever loved someone
    and had to tell them goodbye
    watching as the light fades from their eyes?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and promised them forever
    only to be the one to surrender?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and been so afraid to cause them pain
    that hate is all you ever have to gain?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and had to let them go
    because you were afraid to let your feelings show?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and watched them release their sorrow
    as if there isn't another tommorrow?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and lied to save their soul
    only to find that your no longer in control?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and tried to save them from being hurt
    only to be the one that broke their heart?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and chased away their fears
    as you kissed away their tears?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and thrown away their love
    because you thought you'd had enough?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and violated their hearts with your lies
    just to keep them from saying goodbye?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and you heart was fully healed
    only to be broken again so you could feel?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and confessed your heart and soul
    only to be thrown from their lives into the cold?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and fallen head over heels
    then break their trust and that loving seal?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and trusted them intensly
    that when you parted hate was all you could see?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and put up with all their faults
    until the day they locked themselves in an emotional vault?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and hid your true self behind a disguise
    only to find that all theit feelings were mere lies?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and tried to show them a safer way
    only to succeed in pushing them farther away?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and thought everything would suddenly be great
    only to find that great turns out to be an endless wait?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and tried all your life to show them you care
    but then they walk away leaving you in tears?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and ran from the judging stares
    only to find out later that love and life just ain't fair?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and wanted to find a wau out
    only to be reduced to tears as they scream and shout?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and played their feelings like a game of cards
    just to get cut by the sharp and jagged shards?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and instantly regretted your choice
    as you break down everytime you hear the sound of their voice?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and tried to take comfort in the harbor of their arms
    only to find that those strong arms somehow brought you harm?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and tried to explain your dreams
    only to be confronted by the way they scream?

    Have you ever loved someone
    and had to tell them goodbye
    watching as the light fades from their eyes?




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 11:46:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this poem. you have talent. i do agree with you writing
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by TeeTee | [ Reply to This ]


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