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    dots Submission Name: W...dots
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    Author: Non-Sens-Uality
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 67/80/53
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsW...dots
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    Where is my soul; it lies in snow...
    When will it die; I do not know...
    Why all this coldness, why the chill?
    Who are you, night? So dark, unreal?
    What are these flames, so silver-white?
    Winter might tell, but I will write.

    What it will be? Forms so ethereal.
    Where it will lead? Ask time - the spiral.
    When it will end? Fragtals would know.
    Who is the "I", that will not grow.
    Why - being the final question.
    Winter, the season - my detention.




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 12:31:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can certainly see why the poem is called "W...". It's intriguing. I know you only ask the big questions that most of the time have no awnser . This poem really shows that side of you. I'd say this made me think of a mimic. I don't know why before you ask. It's like a turnabout...too delicate for thoughts and impossible to imagine yet also so very luring for the curious. Tricky one!
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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