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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 637
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       I know that sucks.. but, it was all that was what came to mind... it is true though..


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    you don't know what to do
    and no one can relate
    people see you cut
    and say that you've gone insane
    so what if you're different
    who gives a damn
    all that people see is someone
    who is different than they




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 13:16:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem pretty much sums up how people think of you after they find out you cut yourself. Very cool poem.
    Keep it up hun,
    -Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]


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