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Small town girl Nobody knows She covers up with baggy clothes She's the one hiding behind a brick wall She's the one they laugh about at the mall If you could step into her shoes and walk for a mile You'd know why she refuses to smile Under her sweatshirt Her arms riddled with bruises The cuts on her wrist They aren't what she chooses If you could break through her tough outer shell You'd see her heart, her private hell You'd see her dreams, her hopes, her goals You'd see her bruised and battered soul Small town girl Nobody knows She suffers in silence beneath her black clothes She goes it alone because no one is there She cries on her own because no one will care When she hears his car pulling up the drive She runs to hide but he picks her out He breaks her down, ever so slowly Picturing her as the failure he himself has become Her bruises grow darker Her blood starts to pour He leaves her there Behind the closed door She wishes he would stop That he's cut himself instead The scars he leaves her with Makes her wish she was dead Small town girl Nobody knows She cries out loud her forgotten woes When he leaves she cries out for salvation Hoping to God someone will hear She knows she's alone in this cruel little world She screams when she see's her face in the mirror She wants to be smart She wants to be pretty She wants to be accepted without their pity When people see her bruised, bloody face She wants them to love her, not her disgrace He's destroyed her esteem, her love he's forgotten If only he knew the scars she has gotten Small town girl Nobody knows She covers up with baggy clothes |
wow this is definetly good and going on my top fav your so a good writer i see all your poetry and its just marvelous i applaud you.| Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by Dominic_poet | [ Reply to This ] | very nice flow , u have got talent cant wait to c more of your writing | | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Kasper187 | [ Reply to This ] | i love this | totally going on my favorite id love to hear more of your poem you sound very welly writer | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ] | This made me tear up and cry, and I'm in the middle of our small town's high school computer lab. Marvelous beat and rhythm. I applaud. | | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by DamageAddict | [ Reply to This ] | absolutely perfect... its going on my favorites... | Katana | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ] | "When she hears his car pulling up the drive | She runs to hide but he picks her out He breaks her down, ever so slowly Picturing her as the failure he himself has become" I have a problem with this stanza. Every other stanza has at least one rhyme in it. Except this one. Although this is a moving write, and beautifully written. It is just that one part that makes my eye twitch. | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by Karios | [ Reply to This ] | |