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    dots Submission Name: the rosedots
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    Author: vencix
    ASL Info:    16/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    1.42 - 14/78/49
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 160



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    dotsthe rosedots
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    roses there red symbolizes the love for some one we love and the Thorns symbolizes the hardships we endure a relationship the rose the best gift to go with love




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 14:45:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love it but you need to add more!
    talk about short and to the point, i love your detail, but that's just a tease!
    love it- crazymunchkin
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by crazymunchkin | [ Reply to This ]
      Very true, when you're using symbols to create images and true words that represent a touchy and flimsy subject such as love, you have to have it true, or it's off and...

    Love it!
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]
      Good Job Vencix
    Just one spelling error you might want to correct Torwns are spelled Thorns
    I like the emotion and I really like how you speak truth in your writes
    That is an important asset to a fantastic write
    Keep writing
    I can definately see an improvement in your writes
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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