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    dots Submission Name: Black americadots
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    Author: Crimson_Rose
    ASL Info:    17/F/COLORADO
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 97
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsBlack americadots
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    the door opens
    and the light that comes
    throught the door blinds me
    i close my eyes.
    when i open them
    the sun is gone.
    the sound of
    wailing fills the air
    and i find that it
    is my own voice.
    the stench of stail urine
    burns my nostrils
    my stomach cramps with
    hunger, i weep for
    food but there is none
    to be had.
    i hug myself for company
    and try to consoal
    myself.
    the houes drag on
    and begin to blend
    how long i sit there and
    cry i do not know,
    i am only a black infant
    and the days i spend in this
    abandoned shack i fear
    will take my life.

    Crimson_rose




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 14:54:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      In this poem why is the reader left alone?
    Is the mother near by?
    why dose no one hear your cries?
    I'm sorry, I read this poem and all I have is questions.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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