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That Day

Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
Words: 115
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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That Day

The more Im around you,
I fall more in love with you,
I know that you love me ,
I know that you care.

I am still waiting for the day to come,
For you to bend down on one knee and propose to me.

I want it to be special,
Not just a proposal.

You giving me a dozen roses,
kissin' me, and tellin' me that you love me,
Tears fallin' from your eyes.

You tellin' me why you love me,
And what I do to make you happy.

When that day comes,
Who knows what I'll do.

But we could make it last until THAT DAY comes.

Submitted on 2006-12-01 15:33:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That's such a georgous poem Latishia. Really heartfelt and so full of emotion its amazing. You really do put your heart into your work, it shows. Can't wait to read more of your work. well done xxx

| Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
  I feel like I can relate me and ny boyfriend just got engaged. I know I'm young and probably foolish, but I guess you could say I'm blinded by love. I do hope it'll last, who's knows?
Great write hun,
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
  oh, how sweet...and romantic.
this reminded me of the verse that goes 'i love you more today than yesterday, but not as much as tomorrow.' emotional and heartfelt piece, well done!!
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
  is that today?
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by mrmundane | [ Reply to This ]

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