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    dots Submission Name: Copy Catdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 572
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    Description:
       A poem about people who copy other people when they have no idea what it is like....


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    Copy cat
    Look at that
    Everything I do
    You must do it too
    Attention whore
    What a bore
    Your jealous
    And envyess.
    Want to be me
    But you can't see
    You have no clue
    What I do
    You don't know my pain
    Yet you want to feel the same
    I don't get it
    Why must you do it?
    Copying me will get you no where
    You have no clue what emotions lie there
    So stop it before you get screwed
    And everyone sees what you are tryin to do
    You want to be like me?
    If only you could truly see.




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 18:03:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whoever said imitation is the most sincere form of flattery? This is really nice, the flow was amazing. I have nothing bad to say on this at all except you mispelled envious with envyess. Thats it. Loved it though.

    You are amazing,
    Jay.

    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      Its so annoying when someone copies everything you do, i havent had to suffer that personally but friends of mine have had proper stalkerish friends who decided to copy everything about them, the prases they used alot and the exact clothes they wear rofl. A REal nice poe with great structure and very good flow. Real emotion in this one. well done. Love it as always. xx

    ~lou~
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]


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