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    dots Submission Name: Let My Problems be Minedots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 448
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 786



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    dotsLet My Problems be Minedots
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    Stop pretending
    That you understand
    When you have no fucking clue
    How I feel and why I do this
    Your such a wannabe
    and nobody
    Leave me alone
    Shut up!
    You have nothing good to say
    Why won't you just
    Go the fuck away
    You think it's cool
    To hurt yourself and be like me?
    Your so stupid
    I am something
    you don't want to be!
    You have no friends
    and you know why!
    All you do is act and pretend
    Why can't you be yourself?
    Show your real colors!
    Who gives a fuck what others think?!
    I can't take you anymore
    So until you grow a spine
    Leave me alone
    And let my problems be mine!





    Submitted on 2006-12-01 18:16:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Is this rant directed to someone you know or someone you want to know, that is your self. I dont know it seems like a more inner demons kind of thing. it was a nice rant though, probably got a lot off your chest.

    Always here,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the message. I'm not so crazy about the styling, but that's just me, and this seems more like the whole purpose was just to vent and finally get a point across. In general, I like it.
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]


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