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    dots Submission Name: Fuck "Chicken Soup For the Teenage Soul."dots
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    Author: Pabapfc
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 111/107/66
    Words: 428
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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       These are nine *really* short poems that I wrote in about... Twenty minutes. They're not that great, but I showed 'em to some people and they loved them. I was surprised...
    So yea... Just tell me what you hate and love.
    -Missy


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    dotsFuck "Chicken Soup For the Teenage Soul."dots
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    Thinking of life,
    and wondering why,
    why did I go though that,
    why did it go on so long,
    why didn't someone see,
    they never asked,
    but then again,
    I never told,
    I could have prevented it,
    Why was I so stupid?

    What was so great,
    why did I hate,
    he wasn't nice,
    and I couldn't get out,
    I was trapped,
    no one opened the door,
    no one saw through the window,
    no one cared to check,
    their mistake,
    my pain.

    Becoming real meant knowing real,
    knowing real meant feeling real,
    feeling real meant doing real,
    doing real... meant pain...

    Now I'm seeing a good guy,
    what will I do,
    will I treat him the same,
    what about him,
    will he do the same,
    he would never,
    he's too sweet,
    too gentle,
    too kind,
    too... him....

    What was your attitude of,
    someone in need,
    a drama act,
    misunderstood boy,
    you couldn't hold your ale,
    so why didn't you sleep,
    why'd you have to torment me,
    why me,
    why not her,
    why not him,
    was it 'cause you "loved" me,
    was it 'cause you "hated" me,
    I did...
    Still do...

    Why can I write and not speak,
    has my writing muted me,
    was it you who muted me,
    and my writing is purely a communication,
    I believe you did,
    you muted my mouth,
    my words,
    my world,
    my life.

    You're gone,
    you've passed,
    it doesn't mean I don't hink o fyou,
    I still cry,
    everytime I think of your smile,
    your laugh,
    your words,
    I cry,
    but I can't bring myself to do the same,
    I loved you,
    I love you,
    but I won't join you,
    not 'til I hear from him,
    and see his face,
    then I know it's my time,
    my time to be with you,
    We Miss You.

    Did you see me,
    did anyone see me,
    did they care if they saw,
    did they advert their eyes,
    did they fucking care,
    I bet they didn't,
    you see,
    they didn't,
    now you can't live with it,
    you can't stand that no one knew,
    think of my pain,
    no one knew,
    I ended up perfect: gone.

    I know she treated you like crap,
    but he did the same to me,
    worse even,
    doesn't excuse it,
    I promise I won't do it to you,
    you're perfect,
    why wouldn't I treat you perfect,
    why can't you just try it,
    I really like you,
    just try it,
    I get butterflies,
    I get nervous,
    why can't you?




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 18:29:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Couple "short poems" stand out to me

    "You're gone,
    you've passed,
    it doesn't mean I don't hink o fyou,
    I still cry,
    everytime I think of your smile,
    your laugh,
    your words,
    I cry,
    but I can't bring myself to do the same,
    I loved you,
    I love you,
    but I won't join you,
    not 'til I hear from him,
    and see his face,
    then I know it's my time,
    my time to be with you,
    We Miss You."
    this makes me think that your writing this part to someone who commited suicide, and your
    strenght to stay here~very nice
    and

    "Why can I write and not speak,
    has my writing muted me,
    was it you who muted me,
    and my writing is purely a communication,
    I believe you did,
    you muted my mouth,
    my words,
    my world,
    my life. "

    that ridiculous hold that some people can have over another
    you really convey good points here~maybe seperate inot several short poems~nice job

    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]


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