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    dots Submission Name: It's Beendots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsIt's Beendots
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    It's been awhile
    Since I laughed
    and smiled

    It's been forever
    since I felt normal
    But no one can tell

    It's been centries
    Since I was fine
    With being me

    It's been a million days
    since I joked
    and felt okay

    It's now too late
    Too much time has past
    The way I am now
    Will always last....




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 18:35:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      people change but only notice it after they have changed.

    however one cannot change back to what one was...just like you mentioned in the following lines...

    "It's now too late
    Too much time has past
    The way I am now
    Will always last...."


    i love ur poetry, i enjoy reading it....
    take a sneak peek at my trash when u find the time!
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
      Heyy, I liked it!
    I like how the stanzas were one sentence... Some grammar mistakes, but who cares. It's poetry!
    I liked it though... Sad, but great.
    -Missy
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Pabapfc | [ Reply to This ]


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