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    dots Submission Name: life is a roaddots
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    Author: vencix
    ASL Info:    17/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    1.51 - 16/83/62
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       i wrote this inspired by these people on elite skills ronsowrds/xgirlxbass


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    dotslife is a roaddots
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    life its a winding road. it makes us go off track some times but we get back on it and drive. for so long until we brake down. then we get fix and are ready to go back again. and drive on the road of life once again.




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 18:41:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I understand what you mean , I have also felt that way about life. Great Poem.
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by TeeTee | [ Reply to This ]


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