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    dots Submission Name: Dancing In The Darkdots
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    Author: lynn7
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 325/223/62
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 179
    Average Vote:    3.5000
    Bytes: 479



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    dotsDancing In The Darkdots
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    When dancing in the dark
    our hearts are aligned
    tears slowly flow down my face
    flood of emotions
    seep through hidden dreams
    to release our heart’s desires
    you sending me sailing
    by just a glance of your eyes
    In awe . . .
    I fall to my knees
    your never failing embrace
    helps me to my feet
    spinning our world into one
    we dance the night away
    until the morning light





    Submitted on 2006-12-01 22:05:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      nice write this was so easy to read and also the reader could feel the passion of the dancer embraced in the dance

    very nice and well done

    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so beautiful/
    the complete image in my head was soo unforgettable.
    i really don't know what to tell you
    i did like how it was short and made me feel want you wanted it to say.


    you sending me sailing
    by just a glance of your eyes
    In awe . . .
    I fall to my knees


    i completely fell apart there.
    <3

    <bleedingtears>
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]



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