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    dots Submission Name: It's still truedots
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    Author: Lover girl
    ASL Info:    17, female
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 83/54/24
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 865
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 352



    Description:
       Guy's in my life seem to only be good at breaking my heart


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    dotsIt's still truedots
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    It's still true
    My love for you
    It grabs me by the hand

    It's still true
    You love someone new
    She occupies all your days

    It's still true
    My heart longs for you
    I need your kiss
    I need all of you

    It's still true
    I painfully love you




    Submitted on 2006-12-01 23:22:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is really cute. and i really like the structure of it. this was wonderfully written.
    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
      this was short but to the point ...just remember that people say "i love you" way to soon and if your young you still have your whole life ahead of you...and you will have pain and you will happiness...so just look forward..Martha
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by Martha McEntire | [ Reply to This ]
      Your poem brings me to a place I dewelled deeply.I don't know if it ever passes away completely.If you cared deeply for some one completely.
    I say to you,keep writing from your heart.It tends to leave a bit of you on every page...
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by Postillion | [ Reply to This ]


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