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    dots Submission Name: lostdots
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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 776
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 488



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    my soul lays uneasy in the bottom of my heart waiting
    my mind is wandering aimlessly hoping to find a single reason for all this deception

    time changes all
    but its all still the same

    so much time and love flourished suddenly cut away by the evil in me
    so much started only lost in vain
    what was the point of it all if i dont even know why

    where do i go from here
    how do i start over again





    Submitted on 2006-12-02 02:32:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good write should of written more but then again we all feeel kind of lost keep writtng and smiles ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      Very sad. There is so much emotion behind it that it almost pulls me in, making me feel just like you feel...as for how you start over...just ask me if you ReAlLy want to know-i have a pretty crazy story myself...
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]
      this is good..sounds like you are hurt and lost..we have all been so don't worry all things happen for a reason..and it took me along time to learn that one..so keep up the good work..martha
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by Martha McEntire | [ Reply to This ]
      I say to you,keep writting from your heart.I feel its brings out the best poetry.And leaves a bit of the poet with there poem.
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by Postillion | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem because I know that feeling and you also use deep words. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by TeeTee | [ Reply to This ]


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