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    dots Submission Name: Writer's blockdots
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    Author: elseibi
    ASL Info:    20/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 228/180/38
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWriter's blockdots
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    A little thing called writer's block,
    appears and gives me quite a shock,
    in mid-write im on a roll,
    along it came and ideas stole.

    Im left blank and quite confused,
    as you can tell, im not amused,
    i hum a tune and chew my pen,
    hopeful soon i'll start again.

    Finally thoughts pop in my brain,
    i'll name this poem,
    .....
    NOT AGAIN !!!





    Submitted on 2006-12-02 13:21:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah in my current state I am likely to feel exactly the same way...
    Curse writer's block. My poor brain ><
    Anyhow, I enjoyed the rhyme very much, think that was a good choice to put with a poem like this to enjoy it even more.
    Rawr now I can't think of anything to say!!*mutters irritably in dark corner twiddling pen*
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! I'm not the only one who knows how that feels. Here's one: In the middle of writing the chorus line for a new song, when some dolt comes up and talks to me. I may never remember the tune!!

    I think I'll add this to my favorites.

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      cool cool
    likey likey
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by RichieHM | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand what you mean I really do. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by TeeTee | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! This is cool, Louise! Can't beat a writer's block, so turn it into a clever and fun poem! Ingenious! Dynamite ending!!

    I like your new photo! You look lovely!!
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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