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Writer's block


Author: elseibi
ASL Info:    20/f/uk
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Words: 70
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Writer's block



A little thing called writer's block,
appears and gives me quite a shock,
in mid-write im on a roll,
along it came and ideas stole.

Im left blank and quite confused,
as you can tell, im not amused,
i hum a tune and chew my pen,
hopeful soon i'll start again.

Finally thoughts pop in my brain,
i'll name this poem,
.....
NOT AGAIN !!!





Submitted on 2006-12-02 13:21:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ah in my current state I am likely to feel exactly the same way...
Curse writer's block. My poor brain ><
Anyhow, I enjoyed the rhyme very much, think that was a good choice to put with a poem like this to enjoy it even more.
Rawr now I can't think of anything to say!!*mutters irritably in dark corner twiddling pen*
Cheers
Azuire
| Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
  Ha! I'm not the only one who knows how that feels. Here's one: In the middle of writing the chorus line for a new song, when some dolt comes up and talks to me. I may never remember the tune!!

I think I'll add this to my favorites.

--crimson echo
| Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
  cool cool
likey likey
| Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by RichieHM | [ Reply to This ]
  I understand what you mean I really do. Keep up the good work.
| Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by TeeTee | [ Reply to This ]
  Ha! This is cool, Louise! Can't beat a writer's block, so turn it into a clever and fun poem! Ingenious! Dynamite ending!!

I like your new photo! You look lovely!!
| Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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