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He Loves Me!

Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
Words: 114
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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He Loves Me!

I think Im in love
But what is love
Does he love me
Or is he playing with my emotions.

I know Im in love but what shall I do?
How do I figure out if my partner is true?
We kiss and we hug,
Talk and make love,
We fuss but dont fight,
Is this right.

Does he love me?
Or is he playing with my emotions?
Which could it be?
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me not

When you put it all togeter
What do you get
He loves me
I take his word

He loves me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Submitted on 2006-12-02 16:33:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Love is definitely confusing because it involves the thoughts and actions of two people. I don't analyze it because only those two can tell us what it means to them.

Just enjoy yourself while love is there is your life. And keep writing, blessings to you and your baby. Much joy and love even if "he" isn't there.

| Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
  ^-^ i love it !! this is a really sweet piece showing all the emotions and confusions tied to love. As always you astound me with your ability to put real, pure emotion into your work, it really shows. well done on another great piece. xxx

| Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]

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