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    dots Submission Name: Your so patheticdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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       I was pissed...lol


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    dotsYour so patheticdots
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    Fuck you
    I hate you
    But I love you
    I am so lost
    Outta of time to lose
    Your so pathetic
    In the games you play
    Why won't you just
    Go the fuck away??
    You never had REAL problems
    so don't tell me that shit
    You don't know true pain
    You've never truly felt it
    So stop trying
    To act like you understand
    I am sick of your lying!
    It's time for you to take a stand.
    So cut the crap
    Before you wear me down
    and leave me no other choice
    But to get out of town
    So I can leave you
    Like you deserve
    I don't know what to fucking do!
    So stop now
    Cut the shit
    Don't say I am the reason
    For all your pain
    You cause it
    Not me
    So stop with your
    fake misery....




    Submitted on 2006-12-02 22:55:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This [censored] is [censored]ed up renae. If you have a problem tell me!! OK !! I know what real pain is . Try having your momther doing drugs and you can't stop her. Try being evicted out of the house you want to stay in. Try going through things people shouldn't go through. Yeah you have been through bad but so have I. And I am not making these things an excuse because there not. There not a smpathy call or anything ths is how I feel. Anyway I think this poem is [censored]ed up!!


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    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats [censored]in awsome. I feel this way when people say they got so much stuff wrong with their lives. I just think bull[censored], I'm sure it can't be that bad. They've never had to be hosipalized(I know I can't spell) because of trying to kill themsevles before or cut themsevles or wish every [censored] day they would die. They don't relize that thier life ain't screwed up just because thier parents won't buy them a brand new car or they got an F on thier report card. God they don't know [censored].
    Sorry I just had to get it out. lol.
    Anyway great write great emotion,
    -Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this is one hell of a rant, you weren't kidding when you said you were pissed. excellent job, it's funny how we tend to blame others for our problems, anyhoo, great write.
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      ahh! this is my f uckin anthem!! i love it. great work...going on my favorites for sure.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      You definately capture a topic that needs to be hit...too many times have I seen people faking so much pain...there is enough pain out there already for anyone to make it up. I like the way you address this subject. It would be better if you took out the vulgar language-then it would seem more professional rather than immature. I really like this though, it sounds like you understand pain.
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]


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