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Submission Name:
contra
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Author:
jermwerm
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26/m/FRESNO CA
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4.29 - 203/268/83
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16
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contra
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pro is the opposite of con, so the opposite of progress is congress.
Submitted on 2006-12-03 02:14:35
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A perfect rhyme scheme, mixed with a clever use of metaphor, manifested, a beautiful poem
wait.... there is no rhyme, or metaphor, or imagery....
lol
Seriously though, what ARE you doing?
Is that like a new style, the satirical one liner?
Or a short story, reflecting the state of American democracy?
Do share, the meaning and reasons behind this
| Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by
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