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Author: jermwerm
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pro is the opposite of con, so the opposite of progress is congress.

Submitted on 2006-12-03 02:14:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  A perfect rhyme scheme, mixed with a clever use of metaphor, manifested, a beautiful poem

wait.... there is no rhyme, or metaphor, or imagery....


Seriously though, what ARE you doing?

Is that like a new style, the satirical one liner?

Or a short story, reflecting the state of American democracy?

Do share, the meaning and reasons behind this
| Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Static Scream | [ Reply to This ]

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