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    dots Submission Name: contradots
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    Author: jermwerm
    ASL Info:    26/m/FRESNO CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 203/268/83
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotscontradots
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    pro is the opposite of con, so the opposite of progress is congress.




    Submitted on 2006-12-03 02:14:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A perfect rhyme scheme, mixed with a clever use of metaphor, manifested, a beautiful poem

    wait.... there is no rhyme, or metaphor, or imagery....

    lol


    Seriously though, what ARE you doing?

    Is that like a new style, the satirical one liner?

    Or a short story, reflecting the state of American democracy?

    Do share, the meaning and reasons behind this
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Static Scream | [ Reply to This ]


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