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    dots Submission Name: Moonlight loversdots
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    Author: UnchainedEpoch
    ASL Info:    16/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    6.07 - 5/1/3
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 982



    Description:
       Well ok heres the story. along time ago i had a lover he was the love of my life, i still love him im afraid he'll always be a part of me. well i had an account on here lets see O.o? yes three years ago and i asked him to make one too so he did and he only had a couple of poems on there but the stalking thing had my old account and i read through our comments and the i love you's bla bla bla and yah it brought back old memories. but this was a poem on my account that i made for us because well it was a long distance relationship and he started this thing that we would look up at the moon at a certain time of day everyday and no matter what we wouldnt skip it so that we would feel closer. and it worked and we did and we did it every night for the longest time. ill never forget him and now i cant look at the night sky without thinking of him and wherever he is now or whatever hes doing i hope that hes happy. i miss him with all my heart he wasnt only someone i fell in love with he was my best friend/


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    dotsMoonlight loversdots
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    On shiny nights i shuffle my feet
    to hear the gravel cringe
    On shiny nights I let go logic
    Just to feel loved through night air.
    On shiny nights i cant see you
    But the glow of the moon reveals,
    your deepest thoughts and wanted wishes
    Wished upon the stars right there.
    One thing we have in common
    One thing our worlds share
    When You look into the sky
    The shinyest object there.
    The stars they gleam
    Reflected in your eyes,i long to see
    Watching down on the two of us, its dazing glow
    us Holding hands in Dreams of comfort and nightly slumber
    Connecting your heart and mine
    Reality we both can see
    Mystical vision of that crystal ball,
    that I cant look into without seeing your dream.
    The nights chill wraps around
    and you i want present there
    but until then ill watch the night
    And its, deep moonlit stare...




    Submitted on 2006-12-03 13:58:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi

    I loved this poem, and thanks for the description, it really helped me to understand better your poem. I think it was so nice what you both had. And I know you must be missing him so much.

    My favorite part was this one:

    On shiny nights i cant see you
    But the glow of the moon reveals,
    your deepest thoughts and wanted wishes
    Wished upon the stars right there.

    Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

    XoXo
    Gaby
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Lost_Delirious | [ Reply to This ]



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