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    dots Submission Name: Tracedots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 142
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       This was for DeepDreamer2008's contest about Poetic Face, I didn't win, but I thought it was pretty good.


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    I walk across the rugged and yet smooth jaw line, that becomes a trail in the desert,
    Smooth, yet under my feet your hair gently touches me, and I giggle at the mere touch,
    Dare I to compare your straight nose to a bridge that brings me that much closer to your eyes,
    Thick, and elegant eyebrows that protect and deceive the beauty of your eyes, I trace it too,
    And then the twin pools of deep, deep ice, cold, but yet it holds so much warmth.
    I fall into them, and smile, to remember that I must swim the currents,
    And so I do, only to retrace your face time again, with my touch, with my mind,
    Yet, I cannot without seeing the other, the face of a sister, a sister that shares your eyes,
    Your smile,
    Your lips.
    Your so different, yet I see the similarities and realize that I cannot love you in only one way,
    Not brokenly, fragmentally…
    Only completely, and fully,
    So I must travel the face of your twin, a different terrain that is so foreign to me, yet so familiar,
    I trace and be glad.
    The faces are one and the same yet different,
    Turn towards me and let me see,
    Male and female, I understand,
    I trace, trace, the face of smooth skin, of smooth, yet rough jaw line, the fine eyebrows, and the deep, deep, ice, cold,
    With twins of twins,
    I trace.




    Submitted on 2006-12-03 18:33:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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