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    Author: nikkisan158
    ASL Info:    16/f/IN
    Elite Ratio:    1.13 - 3/16/22
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Passion
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    as she stairs out into the cold an deep wet night. as she entires a state off mind that she can not get out of. life can not go on with out the love of her life. but yet her friends tell her oh ya everything well be alright. but know one new the real reason why the really broke up an whya she was acted the way she was. They had no clue about the other girl the girl she found a pic of when the got into the car crash. only one friend knew what was really wrong but she would't tell any one. she still had feelings for him the love of her life the guys she would always take back. because she loved him an he loved her more then every. THe love they had was as deep as the ocean, an as far was the sky would take them. an as far as the heavens would let them go. They craved for each other touch. Yet that was't enough to save her from what she was about to do. an right as she was about to kill herself, he walked in the door an stopped her. He held here tight an kissed her was a strong an fighting love for her. The love that would always go on.




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