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    Author: L.L.COLLINS
    ASL Info:    25-ORLANDO, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 167/144/32
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 107
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1307



    Description:
       THIS IS MY VERSION OF UNIVERSAL POETRY AFTER THE SLIGHT CONFUSION THIS PAGE HAS RECENTLY ENCOUNTERED I JUST WANTED TO WRITE SOMETHING ANYBODY COULD ENJOY...BUT LET ME KNOW IF YOU THINK IT SOUNDS SORT OF COPY CAT OR ALREADY OR UNORIGNAL I PROMISE I WON'T BEOFFENDED


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    At last,
    You are here
    And I am safe
    in your arms
    So strong;
    You protect me
    From living
    Alone.

    In tears
    I prayed
    For your
    Amazing grace
    And today
    I am blessed
    With your love
    And your faith

    At last,
    You have came
    And dried away
    The rain.
    Bringing shelter
    And warmth
    And rescue
    From the storm.

    My solution
    To delusion
    To winning
    To loosing
    Un-confusing
    It’s your love
    That my heart
    Is choosing

    At last,
    You have arrived
    And eyes are blind
    In sunshine
    Tired of worrying
    And crying
    And hurting
    Deep Inside
    Like a hero
    Of hope
    Flying In
    From God knows
    With water
    For the rose
    You were there
    To hold me close

    At last
    You are home
    And fright and fear
    Are gone,
    The rips
    And the shred
    Are finally
    Re-sewn

    And time
    Stands still
    The desert winds
    Chill
    My broken heart
    Is healed
    And at last
    Love is real.




    Submitted on 2006-12-03 19:47:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Amazing...

    This poem was beautiful on so many levels. The intensity of her feelings for her love, the incredible fear and emptiness when he was gone.

    The deep relief that he's returned, coupled with the innermost underlying fear that; though he's back, it may not be real or for good.

    Of course I could just be crazy too lol!!!

    Meow!!!
    Lynx
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by lynxstarfire | [ Reply to This ]
      New stuff!!! I'm not sure what I think about this exactly...It just doesn't really...feel like you...not that I think this isn't your work...it just doesn't really seem like your normal write...but maybe that's what you are trying to do, try something new...and that's good...it's always good to expand as a writer...so im not going to say, yay or nay, on this one...i'm going to wait and see where you go from here...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by redeemer | [ Reply to This ]


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