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    dots Submission Name: CHRISTMAS TIME IS SPECIALdots
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    Author: bigrig0625
    ASL Info:    34 M Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 40/73/19
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 928
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1068



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    dotsCHRISTMAS TIME IS SPECIALdots
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    Christmas time is special
    It feeds the merry soul
    For some it's not so sweet
    They're left out in the cold

    Christmas time is special
    Full of candy, gifts, and cards
    For some who aren't so lucky
    It opens wounds and scars

    Christmas time is special
    A time for song and dance
    For some there are no parties
    They never get the chance

    Christmas time is special
    A wreath hangs on the door
    For some the snow is blinding
    And burns them to the core

    Christmas time is special
    A time for us to smile
    For some their heart is broken
    They haven't for a while

    So make this Christmas special
    For someone you don't know
    A smile, a card, a Christmas gift
    To say God loves you so

    You may just be surprised
    The twinkle in their eye
    Will fill your heart with something
    That money cannot buy








    Submitted on 2006-12-03 23:43:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Excellent poem, this from someone that is alone for the holidays, keep writing, Dean
    | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, this is fantastic!! the flow and rhythm are perfect.
    very touching, good way to make the point of thinking of others less fortunate, at this time of year especially. makes us look around and realise how lucky we really are.
    thank you for sharing this, you done an excellent job here!!
    michelle
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome...I loved every word..you made it all fit together nicely...I think that people always forget those that don't have enough this time of year...I am always mad at myself because I always want to do more but just can't..hopefully this will remind those that never think of others...good job..Martha
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Martha McEntire | [ Reply to This ]
      well let me be the first to comment on this touching poem...it makes me happy t read that u thing about those who are less fortunate at christmas time...and although i have a good christmas every year..i still make time to donate and volenteer to the less fortunate... great job..this is a poem i would like to see on t.v every year b-4 christmas....keep it up
    ~andie~ xoxo
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by Andie | [ Reply to This ]


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