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    dots Submission Name: Tales of the Northwest Rebellion - S'il Vousdots
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    Author: Fougene
    ASL Info:    17/m/Saskatoon Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 23/22/39
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Regarding the Northwest Rebellion in Canada when the First Nations and Metis fought for aboriginal land and rights.


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    dotsTales of the Northwest Rebellion - S'il Vousdots
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    get me a coffee
    s'il vous plait
    let us sit and talk
    the people, the passion, the politics
    if you please

    a decade and half ago
    we had
    the people
    the passion
    the politics
    they were riel
    then it all left
    he left

    we try to find
    him, write
    him, pray to
    him
    if you please
    so he can
    repondez
    s'il vous plait




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