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    dots Submission Name: Tales of the Northwest Rebellion - Looeydots
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    Author: Fougene
    ASL Info:    17/m/Saskatoon Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 23/22/39
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       The death of Louis Riel from an interesting and fictional perspective


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    dotsTales of the Northwest Rebellion - Looeydots
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    Looey, they called him
    I believe they meant Loony

    Ladies and gentlemen
    Here stands Christ himself
    A mere laughing matter
    To be hanged today like a gentleman
    A real miracle

    The noose tightens

    If natural selection was dirt
    I would make him eat it

    Who knew both Sons of Men
    Could die of suffocation
    One of the lungs, one of the neck
    A real miracle

    His mouth gapes
    Silent
    His eyes bulge
    Indignant
    Boy, what a view

    Ladies and gentlemen
    Behold Christ himself




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