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    dots Submission Name: Tales of the Northwest Rebellion - Before Hangingdots
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    Author: Fougene
    ASL Info:    17/m/Saskatoon Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 23/22/39
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 665
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    Description:
       From the point of view from Louis Riel's jail guard, Riel's last and best friend.


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    dotsTales of the Northwest Rebellion - Before Hangingdots
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    His body
    As eternal as a burning candle
    Hosts a voice
    Object of my admiration so
    A pair of hands
    That carried many a candle-lit nights
    Innumerable strokes of the pen
    Of one solitary cell
    Feet that did him no good

    The world can do without
    An accountant, a lawyer
    Or a jail guard
    But the world needs
    A pursuer of a shared passion
    A martyr that did not die

    His body was a withering flame
    His features radiance beaming
    His mind was the scalpel of all passions
    His name was

    Louis Riel




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