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    dots Submission Name: Nyquil and Methadonedots
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    Author: Frivilous _
    ASL Info:    17/M/Colo.
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 26/18/12
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 197
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       It's the first poem I've writen for a long time.


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    dotsNyquil and Methadonedots
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    What do they know about me?
    What was so wrong about us?
    They took everything I knew away,
    My joy my laughter and even my trust,
    Why the fuck did it end up like this?
    I knew what I wanted,
    and what I wanted was bliss.
    Now in my life there's a hole that's empty,
    a space that will never be filled,
    because it was you who kept me.
    I want it to be how it used to be,
    Out in my back yard, smokin' some weed,
    Ex out the Nyquil and fuck methadone,
    'cause that's what leaves me here all alone.
    I want to here your laugh, I want to see you cry,
    I want to be with you, 'cause I feel like I will die,
    I ask why I lived because emptyness consumes me,
    But in my heart and mind I know one day we will be,
    Words seem lost from my once free lips,
    When I remember the times you'd just whip out your tits,
    Yes, those were the times, I knew them well,
    When we both knew for sure that we'd end up in hell,
    I miss those times and want them here now,
    and one day we will have them somewhere somehow.

    I miss you....




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      Wow this chick really broke your heart. Im very sorry i know how that feels. Another fav. i love your poems. :' (
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]



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