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    dots Submission Name: love is something to look fordots
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    Author: vencix
    ASL Info:    17/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    1.54 - 16/82/58
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 139
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 294



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    love it is something to look for it is something that you can find in so many ways. if its a kiss or a hug there is love you no when love is in your life. ether you've falling head over heels for some one. or you say i love you to some one love is there. because love is something to find.




    Submitted on 2006-12-05 09:48:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey i totally agree with this poem...very nice...love is great when u have it in ur life huh? ne who nice job!
    ~Andie~
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by Andie | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey i totally agree with this poem...very nice...love is great when u have it in ur life huh? ne who nice job!
    ~Andie~
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by Andie | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it because it is so true love is definately something everyone should find and embrace
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by social circus | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this it makes me happy! Really sweet! Good writing! Much Love Chelsea
    | Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by Chelsea_Is_Neat | [ Reply to This ]
      sometimes love finds you, especially when you're not looking for it, ya know. I like ur optimisim about love being everywhere. i'm grateful everyday that i have my son cause that is an unconditional love, he loves me for being me and that's the best kind of love of all.
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      Love is something to find, and sometimes you don't even need to look for it because it's there. Well, I think this is a piece that needs just a tiny bit of attention, capitalization, maybe a little visual...anyway, I still love it just as I love your other writings.
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]
      It sounds like a sweet song for when I'm walking down a sunshine place filled with daisies and a lot of glow. I'm happy and it's a perfect day -- and then some birds are flying over me. I think it's a very known and used phrase -- "Love is something to look for" But it's used in this poem -- while a bit overused to me...it's used in a way that makes me smile.
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Clouds | [ Reply to This ]


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