i love so much of your work and I already have one of your pieces as my favorites. You did a great job on this one. You put into perspective how without bad no one would notice the good in this world. You have a great talent and I would like to read more of your pieces.
Great one. Sounds excellent. The flow runs good even though the rhyme is a little irregular.
Second line of the first stanza - you wrote dus instead of dust. Third line of the third stanza - you wrote ather instead of other. Fourth line of the third stanza - you wrote hevan instead of heaven. Third line of the last stanza - you wrote wo instead of who. Last line - you wrote thier instead of their
These things happen to me too all the time. The idea here is brilliant however.