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    Author: lynxstarfire
    ASL Info:    26/Feline/MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 100/106/54
    Words: 992
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 948
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    Description:
        Flights of Fantasy is a series of adult-themed Poetry/prose/ prosetry that I began writing in february of last year. this is the second chapter/story which contains elements of BDSM, squirting orgasms, FETISHISM and other such FemmeDomme/subguy activities.

    <u> MOST CHAPTERS/STORIES HAVE DIFFERENT THEMES BUT ALL ARE ADULT ORIENTED AND CONTAIN ADULT LANGUAGE AND SITUATIONS IN THEM DO NOT READ IF UNDER LEGAL AGE FOR YOUR PLACE OF RESIDENCE, ARE OFFENDED BY SUCH THINGS OR IT IS ILLEGAL IN YOUR PLACE OF RESIDENCE TO READ SUCH MATERIALS"</u>


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    "I've got a surprise for you" she said to me as she walked into the bedroom. "A surprise? what kind of surprise?" I asked curiously. "OH trust me I think you'll definitely like this surprise but you'll have to do some things for me." She replied while opening up the black plastic bag that was in your hand. "Ok well what do you need me to do love?" I asked. "First I want you to put this on" she answered handing me a black leather blindfold. I blushed and took the blindfold and giggled as I slid it over my head and positioned it so that I could not see.


    "Now I want you to lay down and relax and simply enjoy what I'm doing. Can you do that for me?" She said teasingly as I lay down on the bed. "Well of course I can Love, but what do you have in m..." I was cut off as what i assumed to be a ball-gag was inserted in my mouth, she then securely fastened the straps behind my head. "I said just lay down and enjoy, I did not say anything about talking..." she said firmly as she shoved me down to the bed. I lay still, blindfolded and gagged wondering what was next.

    I could hear the rustling of the plastic bag and then heard a box being opened. then i heard what sounded like clicks of buttons or snaps. I heard the distinctive snap of a bottle being opened. Next she moved between my legs and i felt a finger penetrate my ass as her free hand guided my hand to the headboard and then... *click,click,click* my left arm was locked in a set of metal handcuffs. my right arm was quickly guided upwards and the same thing followed.

    I gasped as i realized that i was now entirely helpless, bound, gagged, and blindfolded as i was. Laughing softly, as she heard my gasp she said "What's wrong love? don't be scared, You know I won't hurt..." she removed her finger and slid forward, at which point the head of a large cock penetrated me as she paused in the middle of her sentence "...you" I moaned out as loud as possible with the large rubber ball held securely in my mouth. She moaned in reply saying "you like that baby? you like feeling me enter you? you like being fucked?" I nodded my head firmly as she began to slide in and out of me, grasping my legs and placing them on her shoulders as her speed increased.

    I moaned loud muffled moans of pleasure through the gag as each inward thrust slid deep into my body. she too began moaning and altered her thrusts, sliding the penis in a rolling motion as she entered and exited my body. deeper and faster. my body began to tremble as little waves of building pleasure washed over and through me, making my hole contract in little spasms as my love began to fuck me faster and harder. little moans of pleasure escaped her lips as she thrust into me faster and deeper, harder and more hungrilly. little explosions of technicolor neon lights began to form in front of my blind-folded eyes as her invasion of my body forced me closer and closer to orgasm.

    she began to power into me, slamming my ass mercilessly as her moans turned into wild passionate screams, her own orgasm flooding her body as she drove your cock ruthlessly into me. my body began to tremble and then full-scale spasm as she forced me over the edge and thrust me brutally into a tidal wave of orgasmic bliss, slamming her cock deep inside me as stream after stream of thick hot cum shot in jets out of my extremely hard cock landing on my tits and stomache. I lay there under her thrusts shaking violently from the continuous orgasm that her actions kept me in, every thrust forcing yet another tsunami to flood my senses causing me to loose all possible control as wave after wave of pleasure mercilessly crashed into me.

    her screams of passion became more intense as the thrusting increased in depth and intensity forcefully keeping me in the ultimate non-stop fullscale full-body orgasm she had given me at the moment her own orgasm thrust her into the throes of pleasure and bliss, burying her massive cock deep inside my tight trembling ass as each wave crushed into her senses, flooding her with lust and desperate need for more.

    she continued to take me, Dominating and owning my ass as her penis drove into me brutally, using me to satisfy her carnal desires, keeping me unable to be released from the intense tidal wave of bliss she had thrust me into as you, forcing me to have wave after wave after crushing wave of orgasmic release, expelling every last tiny drop of cum out of my body with each pump into me, until she finally buried every last inch of her extremely large cock as deep as possible inside my well-fucked ass and moaned long and loud as spasm after spasm washed over her causing her to vibrate torturously as my mind was Dominated and Overpowered by the orgasmic experience she continued to force onto me....

    I lay there trembling and shaking, unaware as she removed the strap-on from my ass, unhandcuffed me and licked away all the cum before saying, "remove the blindfold and the gag" I did so automatically as if on auto-pilot and opened my eyes, "you were exquisite my sexy little kitty... thank you..." "You're welcome Mistress" I replied without thinking... "no sweetie...I'm not your Mistress..just your Love..." she said before pulling me into her arms and holding me close to her "thank you love..." i whispered softly. "No, thank you..." she answered.




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