What's It To Take

Author: poetic_tragedy ASL Info:    16/f/USA Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39 /55 /30 Words: 104

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What's It To Take

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What's it to take me And hold me in your arms? What's it to lie to me And tell me I'm just fine? What's it to love me Accept me for all I am? What's it to hurt me? My mind says I can't take it, my heart says I can. What's it to kiss me And tell me of my shame? What's it to cry with me Share with me the hurt I can't explain? What's it to comfort me When my strength starts to fade? What's it for me to say I love you? What's it to say my mind's been made?

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