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What's It To Take


Author: poetic_tragedy
ASL Info:    16/f/USA
Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39 /55 /30
Words: 104
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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well...err...uhh...i got bored in science...: )


What's It To Take



What's it to take me
And hold me in your arms?
What's it to lie to me
And tell me I'm just fine?
What's it to love me
Accept me for all I am?
What's it to hurt me?
My mind says I can't take it, my heart says I can.
What's it to kiss me
And tell me of my shame?
What's it to cry with me
Share with me the hurt I can't explain?
What's it to comfort me
When my strength starts to fade?
What's it for me to say I love you?
What's it to say my mind's been made?




Submitted on 2006-12-06 15:05:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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