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    dots Submission Name: What's It To Takedots
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    Author: poetic_tragedy
    ASL Info:    16/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39/55/30
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       well...err...uhh...i got bored in science...: )


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    dotsWhat's It To Takedots
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    What's it to take me
    And hold me in your arms?
    What's it to lie to me
    And tell me I'm just fine?
    What's it to love me
    Accept me for all I am?
    What's it to hurt me?
    My mind says I can't take it, my heart says I can.
    What's it to kiss me
    And tell me of my shame?
    What's it to cry with me
    Share with me the hurt I can't explain?
    What's it to comfort me
    When my strength starts to fade?
    What's it for me to say I love you?
    What's it to say my mind's been made?




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