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    dots Submission Name: God-likedots
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    Author: Samuel Bielz
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 151/182/46
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 146
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    Bytes: 749



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       Genisis 2, and John 1.


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    dotsGod-likedots
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    My words are my skeleton,
    His word was His son.
    His word was Him,
    They were both one.

    I spoke my words,
    And my bones were heard.
    The were resounding,
    Like the song of a bird.

    He spoke out Himself,
    And born, was His son,
    Whom was Hiw own word,
    They were still one.

    My soul has now spoken,
    And you came to be.
    I am but half of myself,
    Until you come to me.

    He made us like Him,
    His word like my rib.
    As His word became flesh,
    So my bones are ad-lib.

    Now comes the union,
    Oh, bone of my bone.
    Once we become one,
    We're never to be alone.




    Submitted on 2006-12-06 20:08:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      umm... Jesus called...he said to SPELL CHECK@^$#%@&@(*#

    Just kidding Jesus would never call me.

    nice lyrical inspiration. I think some of the rhymes could use a bit of originality. ie Word :Bird - Bone : alone. But if this is the kinda stuff your god is into, have at.

    The ninja is nunja.

    sol
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by solararia | [ Reply to This ]



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