Description: This is the shortest complete little bit of work that I've ever written. While I could extend upon it, I'd only be repeating myself. Plus, this imagery would be rather tedious to read if it sent on for pages.
Don't you love my vernacular? I admit, I could have added more complicated, obscure words, but I did homework today and do not feel like revising it.
Mama -------------------------------------------
A cry of fury erupts from blackened lungs;
destroying the lining of her esophagus,
burning pale flesh,
shattering a fragile ribcage.
It's always a shame when the strong crumble into vehement waste.
Wow, you said it, inc=redible and I don't see how you could do better in defining the basic picture.
A cry of fury erupts from blackened lungs; destroying the lining of her esophagus, burning pale flesh, shattering a fragile ribcage. It's always a shame when the strong crumble into vehement waste.
This is quite a portrait of "mama" in fact it could serve as her biography and tells us much about the person she was.
I could ramble more but I'm not going to, just making it a fave, and saying congratulations. Dubiously deserving as it is!
Submission Name: Mama
