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    dots Submission Name: Transgression ~ Prologuedots
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    Author: parekura
    ASL Info:    26/M/Israel
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 2/1/8
    Words: 739
    Class/Type: Story/What you did
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    Bytes: 4317



    Description:
       Davie finds his innermost nature of his being and tries to understand why everyone call him a monster.

    This is a hard story and not recommended for readers under 18.


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    dotsTransgression ~ Prologuedots
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    "Damn them! these fucking bastards!" Davie cursed. "They cracked open me apartment's door at fucking three o'clock in the morning! Policemen flooding in like there's no tomorrow! Took me in while I was still in bed! Handcuffed me while I was naked! I didn't even have the time to put me pants on, believe you me! And then that fat excuse for a cop that calls himself "Inspector" Herrings hit me in the nuts just for the kicks of it, he said! Now I may be a crook, but I know me rights when it comes to police brutality!"
    "Shut up David!" The other Inspector spat the words out. "You're bleeding on my table!" Then he came closer to the boy, who was no more than 25 years old. He grabbed the boy's shaved head and raised it, so he looked right into Inspector's furious eyes. "You're no crook, David. You're scum and much more than a scum, I say. You're a murderer."
    "But I'm-"
    "Shut up! I haven't finished yet!" He screamed into the boy's face. "As I was saying, you're much more than a scum, you fucking son-of-a-bitch! You're a rapist too! A real fucking monster, you are!" He spat in his face, then threw some photographs on the table, and smashed the boy's head on them. "Look at what you did! Look good, because this is the only thing that will stick in your mind for the rest of your worthless fucking life!" He grabbed and raised Davie's shaved head until their eyes met. "I can see fear in your eyes, David and it's revolting! I'm sick of shit like you! You hear me?! You make me sick!! I come home to my wife and kids and ask myself; am I doing a good job? Are my children, my wife safe from monsters like you, David?" David didn't say a word.
    "Answer me, dammit!" The Inspector smacked the boy in the face and he fell off from the chair. Blood stained the corner of his right eye.
    "…I wouldn't know, sir…" Davie said, coughing blood. The Inspector sat on the other side of the table and looked at him.
    "You know, it's strange you wouldn't know. You're one of them, are you? Of course you are! We have all the evidence we need to make you see the truth; that you are a monster, not worthy of being a human being." He sighed. "You know that the Captain didn't authorize Inspector Herrings to interrogate you. You're lucky enough to get out of his grasp only with a kick in the nuts and that’s all. He's after your blood, you see and I can understand it. Oh yes I can understand him perfectly. After what you've done, you deserve no less than her fate… her fate that was sealed by your bloody hands! And you'll see, your time will come and no matter what you say, no matter what you do, David, your fate is sealed too." "Guards!" He yelled. "Take this scumbag away from my sight!"

    Davie couldn't move. His body ached and his sight was blurry. The guards took him and threw him into a small prison room. "I hope ye rot 'ere." One of the guards punched him before they threw him in and Davie felt he couldn't take another breath. "Ye deserve much more for what ye've done!"

    When they left and locked the doors behind them, he finally let himself breath. Tears fell from his eyes as he crawled onto the bed and sank his face into the pillow. He couldn't stop the tears from going and for the rest of the night he lay and cried.

    He felt neither remorse nor fear. He felt misunderstood. 'How can they think that I'm a monster, when I am just a human being, as human as any of them? They ask me "Why? Why did you do it?" And I want to answer, but who can, who want to listen to a guy like me? Are there no real humans left in this hypocrisy? I wonder if anyone will ever believe me reasons for doing what I did. I'm guilty, yes, by their definitions of law. But I don't feel guilty. Inside me I am forever loyal to the true, naked nature of mankind. With time, I hope someone will understand me…' Eventually he fell asleep.




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