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    dots Submission Name: My Love, My Posessor, My Reaperdots
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    Author: Raven_TheWolf
    ASL Info:    16/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 128/128/63
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 154
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 998



    Description:
       Everybody say "Yay Wangst-y love poems!"

    Gothic was the only type that I could find that I thought fit. Sorry if you disagree.

    This is kind of... off at the end. I think, anyway. I think the whole piece is off, but I want your opinions. Feel free to rip it to shreds.

    Picture owned/created by Darkened_Angel on http://darkened-angel.deviantart.com/


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    dotsMy Love, My Posessor, My Reaperdots
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    If the scars on my face didn't speak truth,
    Could you not consider them lies?

    If it is my sight you take,
    Would you not see for me?

    If you force me into submission,
    Would you not you be my maestro?

    If I become dirty,
    Would you not purify me?

    If poison fell upon my lips,
    Could you not leave me to die?

    If upon my fingertips razorblades lie,
    Could you not leave me defenceless?

    If my heart shows wear,
    Could you not blame me?

    If my skin was red and inflamed,
    Would you soothe my wounds?

    If the weather inside was frigid,
    Would you not warm my psyche?

    If in my eyes you see despair,
    Could you not leave me in my misery?

    If I let myself perish,
    Could you not plan my funeral?

    If left your pride or my life,
    Would you not choose your love?




    Submitted on 2006-12-07 09:49:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well I shall not attempt to answer all of your questions but if you did let yourself perish, I would be sorely tempted to
    clone you.... and start again.
    Dale
    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]



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